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It’s that time of year

9 tips for homeschool portfolios and year-end evaluations

You put together a portfolio of the year’s school work and share it with an evaluator of some kind. In Ohio, for instance, we meet with a certified teacher who will vouch for the fact that each child has “gone up a grade level” based on pawing through whatever materials I’ve cobbled together to share with her. In some homes, that “evaluator” turns out to be the other curious parent who would like to know what the heck you’ve been doing all day every day. It may be your anxiety checking in to make sure you didn’t waste an entire year because you were pregnant for half of it.

The year-end gaze back through ten months of education is powerful in aiding you for the next year (I recommend it!) whether or not you need to provide an official portfolio for evaluation by the state representative.

Here are my tips, gleaned from over a decade of that practice.

1. Enjoy year-end evaluations. This is your chance to review your year with your kids. You’ll be surprised to discover that you did a whole lot more than your guilt allowed you to recall in the middle of the night.

2. Be patient as you hunt through the house for evidence that your children got an education. You aren’t only looking for papers with handwriting on them. You might see a framed Van Gogh print on the wall and remember discussing it over breakfast. Grab it. Bring it to the pile of “stuff” (I’ll tell you what to do with it in a minute). The bird feeders in the backyard and the binoculars should join you at the table too. The box of dress up clothes might yield another memory of the kids acting out Colonial USA story-lines from books you read to them in the fall. Page through, scroll through your calendar to remind yourself of field trips (which include going to the movies to see “Frozen,” the walk through the Asian food section of your local market where you picked out the starfruit to try for teatime, the night walk to listen for owls, and the surprise visit to Daddy’s work place). Make a list with dates. Scroll through the iPhoto files as well to remind yourself of activities you are now forgetting. You can print photos and mount them on paper, adding them to the collection of items you will share with your evaluator.

3. Gather the papers too, though. If you aren’t a notebooker (I was for some years, not so much others), you’ll have a collection of the student’s work. You can select samples for the portfolio. Pick pages written in all three seasons (fall, winter, and spring) to show progress. If you don’t have notebooks to help you, the search may require help from the kidlets. Papers get tucked into every corner of the house (under couches, in dresser drawers, in the art room, smashed in the textbook). The goal is to create a representative sample for the evaluator, not an exhaustive (and exhausting) one. 4-5 pages per subject per child is plenty (unless otherwise instructed).

4. Provide a written narrative of the child’s progress in any subject, particularly those without a paper trail. Let’s say that you spent the year learning about art history, but no one journaled about it, no one wrote a little essay about it, no one put on dress up clothes and acted out a painting. How can you show the evaluator that you studied art? Write it up yourself. Narrate what you did, like this: “This past year, we studied art history. Noah, age 9, became fascinated with Paul Klee’s work. We enjoyed these paintings (include titles). Noah’s primary interest in Klee’s work were the whimsical figures. We saw Klee’s paintings several times at these museums. One time Noah said to me, “…….” (You might ask Noah on the spot for a quote, if you can’t remember. Ask naturally, so that he isn’t resistant, “Remember when we studied that painting by Paul Klee that had the X in it? What did you like about it? Do you remember?”).” Your written narrative should take a few paragraphs. Tell it all, in story form.

The written narrative can incorporate all the children, or it can be specific to one child. If a child is working on math, but doing it all with manipulatives and without text books, write about the processes that were mastered and by what tools. The written narrative is also a wonderful way to record the progress of a child that you can use next year for yourself to see how far that child has come (we all have educational amnesia and forget that our kids ever learned a single thing…every year).

Bring a reading list too (books you read to the kids, books the kids read themselves—multiple readings count!). You’ll be amazed at how many words your kids read or heard read in one year. Truly impressive.

5. Bring books, posters, and tools to the evaluation. I used to put everything in a couple of crates and haul it all into Lisa’s living room. Then I’d play show and tell—one child at a time, or sometimes all at once as I covered a subject at a time. I’d pull out the globe and discuss which countries we studied and how. I’d show Lisa our math manipulatives, I’d lay out the calendar that had our bird feeder watch schedule on it and the tallies we made, and I’d put the completed writing projects on the coffee table in a row so she could see how cool they were.

If you bring big stuff and quality projects with you, there will be no need to have volume. You don’t need workbooks filled with words if there is an impressive homemade Egyptian embalming products five page mail order catalog in full color with hand drawn figures and descriptions spiral bound from Staples. Science can be demonstrated through photos of the baking soda volcanoes and the Blood and Guts projects (affiliate link). Do not be seduced by the idea that your year end needs to be demonstrated through paper alone.

6. Going up a grade level is an arbitrary judgment made by the evaluator. Some kids will leap forward in one subject and stagnate (if there is such a thing when growing and learning) in another. Your goal isn’t to convince the evaluator of what you think it means to go up a grade level. Your job is to represent your year. If your kids were active in all the subjects and you can demonstrate investment and a conscientious attitude about learning, the state would have no reason whatsoever to rule that you have failed in your task. If a child is remedial, the only responsibility you have is to show that the child, while not up to grade level in reading or writing or whatever subject, is making progress (in the sense that the child is being given the opportunity to work on that subject with you in a deliberate manner).

7. Find an evaluator who is sympathetic to your style of homeschooling. Some evaluators are known for having an understanding of unschooling, relaxed or eclectic schooling, and some are not. It helps to find an evaluator who homeschools herself or who has been doing it a while. If you go to one that you don’t like, do not ever go back, ever. Find someone else. You do not need the stress of worrying about how that evaluator will think about what you are doing during the year, while you’re doing it. There are plenty of wonderful evaluators who understand homeschooling and aren’t simply looking for a stack of text books from A Beka.

8. Evaluators are skilled in education, usually. Bring your concerns about a child too. Ask for advice on curricula, praxis, and realistic expectations. You’re paying for their expert status—get some bang for your buck!

9. Finally, trust. Trust the process. I came to love year-end evaluations. They gave me a chance to reflect on my year, to appreciate how much my family did together, and to discover which subjects I wanted to address in the coming year in new ways. I also liked having someone approve of me—giving me the “atta girl” that is absent most of the year when your work is largely invisible to everyone else in the entire world.

I have been told by a couple of moms that they do a year-end show-and-tell in their homes for their kids (fabulous idea, I wish I had thought of). Each child collects his or her work and projects and creates a space on a table or in the house to display what they did that year. Yummy treats and delicious drinks are provided. Everyone in the family walks through to appreciate each child’s work. (A great way to include local skeptical grandparents and aunts and uncles too.)

And now your turn. Any advice about end-of-the-year evaluations?

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Make progress: One-thing tips for teens

Image by Andrea D

You feel better when you get stuff done follow-up tips for high school.

Here’s a list of “one things” your teen can do to turn the day around:

Read (anything, everything—websites, books, articles, instructions for how to play…, song lyrics, discussion boards, comic books).

Contribute online to a discussion.

Have a conversation with a sibling.

Solve a problem (math, plumbing, gaming, the wobbly table, the broken blind, detangling a younger sister’s hair, mediate an argument).

Write one poem.

Study one lyric.

Watch one film.

Plan one outing.

Make a plan for next week that gets the teen out of the house.

Go for a run.

Make one date with a friend for coffee and a movie.

Explain one historical event and the persons involved.

Discuss one social issue (both sides).

Identify a theme in one author’s work and talk about it.

Investigate the answer to one question. Report back.

Play one challenging board game.

Study foreign language vocabulary for one hour.

Learn one new scientific principle.

Find one country on the globe that you have never heard of: identify its language, location, political system, and significance on the world stage.

Look up the requirements for one college of the teen’s choice.

Look up the requirements for one career field of interest.

Apply for one job.

Redecorate the teen bedroom.

Work at the most challenging subject matter for one hour.

Learn one new skill—painting walls, quilting, gardening, programming, writing java, cooking or baking…

Start a business. Sell cookies to neighbors, mow lawns, do light housekeeping, tutor math or reading or writing, restring tennis rackets…

Prepare for one section of the SAT/ACT.

Surf, ski, longboard, throw a frisbee, golf, swim, cartwheel, bounce on a trampoline, throw a baseball, hike.

Play one game of chess.

Start a blog or tumblr.

Tweet.

Take one picture and post to Instagram.

Make one to do list… then “to do” it.

You may need to post this list so that the teen has something to look at when boredom inevitably sets in.

Good luck!

Cross-posted on facebook.

Image by Brave Writer mom, Andrea (cc)

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Brave Writer spotlight: Douglas Henningsen

From Brave Writer mom, Kellie:

Hi Julie – I had to share what my almost 14 year old son [Douglas] wrote for the first assignment in the Help for High School curriculum. I had my co-op class do this assignment in class and gave them about 12 minutes as we were a little crunched on time. I wanted a list of random words to do with the topic he chose, “reading a novel” but he came up with the following instead and to me it’s beautiful and poetic. He is now going to do the second stage of this assignment and write a paragraph using your instructions but I told him we are going to keep the list “as is” so he’ll have two completed works as I find this to be so unique.

Reading at night
Warmth, comfort, pillow against my back.
Book waits.
Read the cover
Open book
Excited
Anticipation
Book opens to me
Swallows me whole
The scene flashes in my eyes
Characters are struggling
Heart pounding
Emotional
trying to help
in the story
nervous
scared
relieved
everything on the tip of a knife
the knife is flying at your face
keep reading
love
pain
heartache when its over
but it’s not
get next book
open the cover
start again
reading more than once
picturing the scenes
the video keeps playing
the rollercoaster starts
we start the incline
its building up
reading on
clock hits 10:00
keep on reading
the final scene
tears in my eye
white knuckles clutch the book
sweat on my brow
I don’t want it to end
Why does it have to end
Clock hits 11:00
Someone dies
Pain in my heart
The pain of her brother
The same pain is mine
Sorrow fills my heart
The page rustles
The smooth paper flips by
Suffering
The fight goes on
I can feel it
In my heart
Tears fill my eyes
But its ok
I can keep going
11:30
I close the book
Its over
I read the back
I put it down and close my eyes
And there it is
I can see it again
In my head
But this time I know how it ends
This time I wont be scared
This time its ok
Then it starts again
I visit it in my dreams
I drop out of consciousness
And open the cover.

[Below] is the second part of the assignment. I’m not sure he learned how to write an anecdote as it’s several paragraphs. But I like the paper. Smile Kellie

The Crying Book
by Douglas Henningsen

Open the book. Three simple words strung together, that’s what they are. But under them is a deeper meaning. These three words speak of a gateway to a whirlwind of emotion, adventure, heartache and satisfaction. And that is exactly the gateway I am going to fall through tonight. I climb the ladder to my bunk and sink down into the multitude of blankets and pillows I keep up there. I plump a pillow and lean back on it, pulling the blanket over my legs. There it sits, the long awaited book, nestled on my lap, calling for me to open it up. Well, don’t mind if I do. I rub my hands together and pick up the hardcover novel. I read the cover, savoring the moment, and then I open it to the first page.

The chapter begins, and with it the movie. The book swallows me whole and poof, there I am, right in the story. I walk around the characters as the chapter runs to a close, then follow them as another starts. Excitement blossoms in my chest and anticipation clutches at my heart. The characters are struggling, I try to help, but they can’t hear me. My heart pounds, emotion floods my senses. I’m nervous and scared. Everything is balanced on the edge of a knife, and that knife is flying straight for my face. I keep reading. Love and pain speed by me, spreading their fingers and brushing delicately over my heart, spreading their emotions before they are gone. It’s over, but it’s not. I reach behind me and pull out the next book. I glance at the clock, 9:30, before plunging back into a world I so desperately want to survive.

The video starts again. The climax of the book is coming, the story that was woven through so many books is about to end. Everything hangs in the balance. The clock hits 10:00, but I keep reading. The final scene, the great story is almost over. My white knuckles clutch the book, making nervous indentations on the paper. Then someone dies. With tears in my eyes I flip the page; it’s not supposed to end this way. I can feel her brother’s pain; it burns my heart, the same heart that has been tossed aboard a fragile dory in a wild sea of emotion. I can’t take much more. Sorrow invades my heart cloaking it in a dark shadow of sadness. The smooth paper flips by my face, wiping a tear away from my eye, I keep reading.

The fight rages on, the battle of good and evil, I can feel the rage of war in my heart, my poor, battered heart. It’s over. Good has triumphed, evil is defeated. A tear runs down my face as I close the book, falling onto the hard back. The tear trickles to the edge of the back, and it almost looks like the book is crying with me. I go to wipe the tear away but my hand stops before it touches the back, then I pull it back to my side. I leave the tear to dry, a glistening trail of water that tells of the emotion packed inside of the cover. I look at the clock, 11:00, time for bed. I reverently lay the book down, and turn off my light. I lie back against my pillow, and close my eyes.

There it is, the book, it’s still with me, playing over and over in my head. But this time it’s ok. This time I know how it ends. This time I don’t have to be afraid. This time the pain doesn’t dig as deep. I drop out of consciousness, and open the cover.

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What Is Enough for High School?

On a pink, green, and white cloud, two young women reading a book at Greenlake, with a daisy chain in a field of flowers, Seattle, Washington, USA

Can you keep having tea parties and going to art museums when your kids hit the age where “it all counts”? Will your college-bound teen be prepared enough if you continue to use the Brave Writer Lifestyle as your guide for language arts and writing instruction?

Or as one parent asked me, “I’ve loved Brave Writer for my child’s younger years, but what writing program would you recommend now that my student needs to get ‘serious’ about writing?” Ouch!

The foundation you lay in your child’s younger years is critical to who your child writers will be in their teens and beyond. There’s no “un-bridgeable chasm” between limericks, lists, and letters, and the academic formats like the expository essay and research paper. Literally, the writing your kids do now (or when young) IS the training for the writing they do as teens and beyond.

Let’s look at speech again. You don’t expect a fluent five year old to lead a business sales meeting, to give a speech or to make a Power Point presentation. On the other hand, all that talking and expressing, the poems recited, the manners learned for introductions and the telephone, the oral reports done in a co-op class—these do all lead the child to eventually have the capacity to learn how to teach or present or speech-ify.

As you head into the white water rapids of high school, remind yourself that the strategies you’ve used up until then will be your best aids for growth in the college-prep years. What are those strategies? Let me remind you, so you can affirm them to yourself.

Reading quality writing. In high school, reading should include non-fiction titles, essays, editorials, reviews, poetry, short stories, both American and British lit, classic and popular novels, and the whole world of online options (discussion forums, chat rooms, blogs, news sites, etc.).

Freewriting. Use freewriting techniques to explore the developing rhetorical imagination of your student. Rather than writing about any old thing, introduce your kids to freewriting about ideas—how they form their ideas, what those ideas mean to them, what the “other side” thinks about those ideas, and how your students react to the opposing point of view.

Brave Writer Lifestyle Items. Keep art, music, novels, movies, nature, and poetry going. In their teens, though, students will find specialties (their favorites), and will be able to delve deeply into the ones they love. Your teens ought to become “obsessive fans” of LOTR or Korean pop music or Chihuly blown glass or spoken word poetry or Scott Orson novels or birding expert Pete Dunne or Shakespeare plays. Let them! This is how teenagers discover the other layer of the subject area – the critics, the fans, the influences from other artists/scientists in the field. This is how they discover the academic task: bringing their perspective to bear on the established field as they develop intimacy with the topic and its field of experts. This is what they will do in college, in fact! But they will apply this skill set to sociology, anthropology, mathematics, and political science.

What will you add to this mix in high school?

Some intentionality is necessary. Good news. Your teens are ready for it! They need two things from you in high school: Freedom to risk, opportunities for adventure.

Risk and adventure can be experienced in both activity (taking a trip to Mexico to work in an orphanage) and thought (examining theories of gaming). Both are necessary. Teens want to prove to themselves that they will be adults one day. They can’t know it on the inside until they have evidence on the outside. They don’t know it by staying in the same living room they’ve been in since birth, with the same people, reading parent-selected material, following a routine of workbooks and text books.

They discover that they are capable of leaving home and family when they have some experiences that test them—that require them to act independently, and that encourage them to think “new-to-them” thoughts.

In writing, that means that they will need preparation for academic writing. They will want to understand how the writing they’ve done in the previous years relates to this new standard in writing. (Some programs treat writing from the younger years as though it has no relevance to the next level of writing, which is tragic.)

Teens should be encouraged to sign up for the local Shakespeare Company as actors (something my kids did), join a marching band, travel with a show choir, play high level sports, or take classes in local high schools or community colleges. They need to get out into the community in their areas of interest so that they can find out that they have what it takes to stand on their own two feet, to prove to themselves that they are growing up.

In Brave Writer, we’ve designed Help for High School and all of our online writing classes for teens with this goal in mind—showing teens how what they’ve been doing relates to what they are being called on to do now. These classes help them to learn how to think rhetorically, how to examine argument, and how to select credible support for their thesis statements. They also learn the vocabulary of expository writing—terminology for analysis, how to form substantive opinions, and how to manage their biases and blind spots. They learn the formats so they have practice using them.

Between specific instruction in academic writing and exploration of a variety of subjects (fashion, linguistics, music, role playing games, nutrition, animation, computer programming, sports, organic gardening…whatever your kids find interesting), your teens will become prepared for life beyond homeschool. For example, college is a depth experience in specific liberal arts and sciences fields. Deep diving IS the right preparation for that world. That’s why homeschoolers do well in college! They already understand how to teach themselves, how to read critically, how to develop and form a legitimate opinion (as long as they have the chance to do those things as teens).

So keep doing what you’re doing, and add a little intentionality in high school, and your kids will be fine!

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I wish you could grade college papers

like I do…

Grading college freshman papers shld be a req'd experience for homeschoolers. You'd instantly feel better abt yr work w yr kids. #homeschool

— Julie Bogart (@BraveWriter) September 24, 2013

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