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Academic Writing: Making a Plan

Academic Writing: Making a Plan

One of our brave moms asked how to fit academic writing into a Brave Writer Lifestyle. This is an excellent question because it brings up several issues that I thought worth addressing here.

First of all, academic writing doesn’t come naturally so it isn’t as likely to fit into a lifestyle the same way, say, poetry reading does. In other words, academic writing serves a limited function which isn’t likely to be repeated for enjoyment and personal fulfillment like fiction or journaling or freewriting. Even non-fiction article-style writing (as you might find in a blog) is much more apt to be incorporated into someone’s life than research papers and structured, closed-form essays.

That said, the student who is confident in her writing abilities will find academic writing a satisfying challenge at best and not too difficult to execute at worst. I like to suggest a writing project per month for other kinds of writing. When beginning the essay, take a bit more time (maybe 6-8 weeks).

The three recommended kinds of academic high school writing:

  • the expository essay,
  • the research paper,
  • and the timed essay.

Let’s look briefly at what writing your kids have been doing that will support their growth in these three forms.

Essay writing is the rhetoric stage version of narration. When your kids are little, they narrate orally, for the most part. As they get older, you jot down their thoughts for them. Then they begin to write their own narrations some time around junior high.

Narrating is not limited to simple retelling. Your kids will narrow the focus of their interest and retell the aspect of the topic or story most important to them. They will learn to retell in their own words, using their personal experiences and knowledge base as sources of analogy and comparison, making the information their own.

The essay, then, is simply a more structured, analytical version of retelling. It goes one additional, new step. It incorporates research into the retelling. Open form, exploratory essays make use of research as a way to examine how an issue can be addressed through a variety of perspectives. Closed form, argumentative essays take a stand and use research to support the claim being argued.

The research paper is like the essay, but three times as long. It takes a larger topic, chooses a position and then writes the equivalent of three essays within it. The main differences between an essay and research paper are the amount of research and the length of the final paper.

Timed essay writing is the mature version of freewriting. If your kids are proficient freewriters, learning how to order timed writing is less of a step than it would be for other kids. Teach the essay first (without any time limits). Then use that format as a way to organize thoughts during the timed essay. Freewriting helps the student to become comfortable with writing under pressure. Timed essay writing requires the student to learn to control himself as he writes.

I suggest learning the expository essay first (both open and closed forms) and writing several in a year (maybe three or four). Then, if you want to do a research paper in high school (not required, imho), do one during your child’s junior year. Save timed essay writing for senior year of high school and devote at least one six week period to writing three or four per week.

Teach it first, but then do it, do it, do it. The best way to learn timed essay writing is to write them.

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Just Say No

Write at the top of your page: NO! in caps, with the exclamation point.

Set the timer for two minutes and write everything that comes to mind related to NO!

Grab a clean sheet of paper. This time write at the top of the page a teeny, tiny no without an exclamation point.

Set the timer for two minutes and write all the things that come to mind when no is tiny.

Now flip the pages over. Start with the big NO!. Write YES! at the top and do the same for the big yes. Then write yes at the top of the back side of no. Write for two minutes for the little yes.

At the end, read and enjoy the different writing these words and sizes conjured up. There may not be any ryhme or reason to them, but then again, there may be. You might even be able to harvest some sentences from these four freewrites to make an interesting poem.

Use the cut and paste method. Print up the lines, cut them into strips and start arranging them (no editing of the actual lines). Just see where they lead and play with all kinds of arrangements. When you’re happy, stop!

Post results here.

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Narrow and Deep Writing

Writing Tip: Narrow the Scope

My professor pulled up his chair in front of the class. He waved his hand at us. “Anyone need help preparing their term papers? Now’s the time to ask.”

Fifteen adults sat silently.

He urged us again.

Silence.

Finally, one student raised his hand. “I’m struggling with my topic. I want to cover the impact of Cone’s theology on the Catholic church, sexuality and justice in America.”

I immediately thought to myself, “That’s not a paper, that’s a book!”

My professor agreed. “Whoa! Slow down. The best term papers are narrow and deep. You want to pick one tiny aspect of the whole and zero in on that. Then you will go as deeply as you can within that narrowly defined topic.”

I loved how he put this. The Topic Funnel (Chapter 6 of The Writer’s Jungle) is all about narrowing the scope of the writing topic so that you can investigate it deeply.

Narrow

A narrow topic comes from a larger subject that the writer knows lots about. Many kids are expected to write generally about the Civil War or the solar system. They only have superficial knowledge of these huge topics and then can only repeat those cliched bits of information in dry paragraph form. Their writing neither reveals insight nor expertise. And your kids know it. So generally, they don’t enjoy this kind of writing.

However, when a fan is asked to write about the Redwall book series, the opposite problem can occur. The child is overwhelmed by the volume of information she knows about the topic and can’t write due to the paralysis of not knowing where to start.

To avoid these twin pitfalls, go narrow and deep.

Narrow a topic by identifying the most interesting aspect of the topic to the writer.

  • Don’t write about gardening. Write about composting.
  • Don’t write about soccer. Write about playing goalie during a losing season.
  • Don’t write about the solar system. Write about the rover excursion on Mars.
  • Don’t write about Redwall generally. Write about Martin the Warrior’s sword.

Deep

Deep writing means that you probe a question related to the narrow topic of writing. Younger kids may simply report or describe the process of composting, playing goalie, the rover’s trip to Mars or how Martin got his sword. For older kids, get in the habit of asking a provocative question about the narrow topic in order to go deep.

  • Ask what method works best for composting when living in the suburbs with limited land.
  • Ask about whether or not the goalie was responsible for the losing season.
  • Ask about the cost effectiveness of the Mars Rover based on what NASA is learning there.
  • Ask how Martin the Warrior’s sword plays an important role in the book, Loamhedge.

Next time your kids get ready to write, think narrow and deep.

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Swinging to the Music

Do you feel out of touch with your teens? Want to generate some conversation to stimulate language and narration? Song lyrics are the poetry of our generation. Songwriters pack so much power into a three minute song. Don’t miss the chance to explore the world of language, theme and message in today’s popular music.

Listen to a favorite song(s) and examine the lyrics with your teens.
Song lyrics are one of the easiest ways to gain access to your teen’s worldview. Suggest listening to one of their favorite songs together with the lyrics.

If you have a particularly reluctant teen writer and communicator, you might not be able to come to your child head-on asking to listen to a song and then to talk about it. Instead, suggest he or she bring a favorite CD in the car the next time you drive together. Ask to listen to one of the tracks and then ask a few questions about the lyrics:

  • Do you know why the songwriter wrote this song?
  • How does this song fit in with other songs on the CD?
  • How does this song address the main topic (love, death, relationships, sex, making a difference, celebrity, pain, depression)? What does it have to say about the main topic?
  • Why does the chorus say what it does? (The chorus is the repeated refrain of the song and usually contains the primary message of the song.)
  • How does the music (instruments) support the message of the song? Does it contrast the message or does it underscore it? (Sometimes a song will have tragic lyrics with an upbeat tune. The writer, in that case, may be trying to strike an ironic note rather than telling you the message sincerely…)
  • Do the lyrics ryhme? Do they work (whether or not they rhyme)?
  • Do the lyrics tell a story or reveal a viewpoint or deal in nonsense or proselytize an agenda? What is it?
  • Is the song effective?
  • What words stand out in the lyrics? Why do they stand out? What’s special about them? (unusual, interesting sound, surprising use, perfect fit with music…)
  • Does the song generate feelings in you? (Elation, depression, anger, rage, peace, joy, inspiration, empowerment…)
  • Do you like it? Can you say why?

Remember, your opinion is not that important right now. You don’t want to turn this into a moralizing moment or a long-winded explanation as to why this song is or isn’t a good match for your family’s religious faith. Rather, use this as a wool-gathering time. Discover what makes your teen tick. If your teen is reluctant to express much, listen together in silence. Share one thing you liked about the song’s lyrics. Then leave it be.

Try again next week. You might even look up other songs on the Internet by the same band, do a bit of research about how the band formed or why they are currently popular, and send an article to your teen via email showing that you are thinking of his or her band.

Music is one of the most personal parts of teen life. If you find a way to enter their musical world, you will enrich both your relationship with each other and their writing lives.

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Preparing for the SAT Essay

Preparing for the SAT Essay

…so he’s like “Gurl, I am so busted.” and he starts FREAKING OUT and then she’s like spazzing and ANYWAYS that’s what I think Hamlet meant in this quote. –Jim Borgman (Zits Cartoon)

I couldn’t find the artwork to go with the above cartoon quote that sits on my refrigerator. The picture shows enormous stacks of essay tests to grade with the evaluator holding a gun to his head.

Here are a few quick tips to prepare for the essay portion of the SAT test:

Come prepared

    Pick three topics ahead of time in three areas: literature or history, current events and personal experience. Make sure that you know these topics well ahead of time.

Bend the topic to suit the question

    The SAT questions are values or ideals related. Tweak your topic to suit the value: sucess/failure, greed/generosity, passion/persistence, imagination/knowledge, education/talent. These are the kinds of topics the test will focus on so get used to bending your expertise to those kinds of areas.

Take a position

    It’s fine if you don’t feel fully convinced of the position, just don’t let the essay reader know that. Pick an “I agree” or “I don’t agree” posture and stick with it. The readers don’t evaluate arguments, but they will mark you down for not having a position.

Start with something visual

    If you set a scene or start with an anecdote, the essay will spring to life.

Use transitions

    First, second and third work but are flat-footed. Tie the previous paragraph to the next one by referencing the former and alluding to the subsequent:

And while television is important in emergencies, the reason it is so popular to today has more to do with entertainment…

Remember that two well-developed points are better than three shallow ones

    Deep and narrow, not wide and shallow.

Conclude with a bang!

    Finish with personal experience, a wish, a provocative question, or showing the larger significance of your topic.

Never

    end with “In conclusion…” For some reason, English teachers are hostile to those two words.

Get a good night’s rest. Take two pencils with erasers so if the tip of one breaks, you have another. If you freeze during the test, close your eyes and breathe for a moment. Allow words to come from within and start writing. You can always take the test again.

Good luck!

–julie

Brave Writer offers an online SAT/ACT Essay Class to help students beat the odds.

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